twelve hours of daylight



We first wrote “twelve hours of daylight” in 2016 as part of an anthology (FEAST) of spoken word poems that are still unpublished. Like most of our work, we take our deep love of the scriptures and weave them together to speak to current realities. In this particular poem, there are a few references to cities, including Vancouver and Montreal, where we were living at the time of writing. For reference, these are the scriptures referenced (including this Sunday’s gospel passage):

  • John 19:25–27 (Mary looking at her son on the cross)

  • John 11:1–44 (Lazarus and Mary) 

  • Luke 4:1–15 (Trials of Jesus) 

  • Luke 15:11–32 (Prodigal Sons) 

  • Genesis 7–9 (Flood Narrative)

  • Matthew 20:15 (Parable of the Workers in the Vineyard)

  • Mark 5:1–20/Luke 8:26–38 (Jesus heals the demon-possessed man) 


twelve hours of daylight
by scraps and wine

we’ve untamed him, let him detract from our grasp

let him pry his chubby hands from around our thumbs and fingers

His sisters watched him unwind, unbind the books in the library

Nimble they go, all too quickly grown

All can be calculated in the circuit of the city

Whose voice said it? Who thought it?

Which brother was buried away, hidden in day

Around and around til he throws up at dawn

We saw that through the door frame

Better at dawn than in the car ride home with his sisters frowning

Patches loosen and soles fall away

Bare with empty wind, flapping pockets sticky now

Shivering, quivering

Strong arms hold him fast, secure, only to throw him out

As doors behind him slam shut, alleyway become dump and tomb

they say we shut the door

Was it not to keep his flooded questions from invading our drought?

If we let him speak, would not that allow the serpent to only bring in doubt?

He’ll tarnish the rest, varnish our name with rust

Are we not allowed to do what we choose with what belongs to us?

Or are you envious because we are generous?

And so he lays his head down with the swine.

Sweat singing around the crows feet that would come

we saw the swine in his eyes, in their eyes:

wild, unkempt, ready to leap off the cliff,

though this sickness will not end in death

But we see the body, see the husks, shelled out for the swine to eat,

they chose the crisis on the streets they walked.

Stole onto the bus without a ticket

Twelve hours of daylight, enough for them to find what they need to survive

Stumbling about as if without light: we gave them streetlamps

He will get better, they said - we have no need to go and search

They will get better, we said, we built them hospitals, paid their taxes, gave them their due

twelve hours of daylight,

the music of the sirens sing us awake in our apartment windows

“You could go to him”

That would be a father’s prerogative

Caring and loving, dutiful and right

No more a mountain unto himself

Your daughter could carry the weight

The estate gone to irresponsible waste

Dribbling away in poisoned veins within the circuit of the city

But your wealth is great, you could carry the cost

Write it off the next year, make something out of the rocks

he’s on the rocks, running off the rocks,

drinking scotch with rocks

Kneel and he could have it all, we could have it all

Do you not want your friends to see you do such a mighty work, a great healing?

You could tell him he’s wrong, bandage all his wounds

I could give you the spell to command him to return

you split ends while ignoring who we are.

Let us be the fool

Then we’ll take the boy.

He chose to leave. We chose to give space

Then we’ll take the boy.

They re-zoned the apartment he was in.

We shall not use injustice as a form of outreach

But your movement, your name: Are you not Abba?

I am who I am. Begone,

his babbling and giggles still grace the edges of our memories,

when we held him to breast for the very first time

The boxed panes rattle, as if to announce any presence but the wind

We turn and turn again at the sound

Our heart milling and mixing in the trough, ground up against the rocks,

we’re ground up on the rocks

The waters crash on cobbled streets,

amidst all the endless snow and construction

Grieving for the coast and city to collide

Built together for us to reside

He takes the bus along Hastings each day

Never going anywhere, no defined destination

Just thinking and looking

While I fixate on the business, on the day-to-day

Washing the dishes he eats from, making sure he can get to the washroom,

Helping him find the bus pass he keeps losing, he keeps losing

Our eyes trace the well-worn landscape,

the same faces, the same places -

I know my son and my daughters

We came upon the face and features of Bethany

he could see our face in the rear-view mirror

Why did you not come sooner? Why this feast? With too many tears?

let our tears come.

let them rain upon the land.

weeping upon it with a kiss

Tear upon tear upon tare: layers amidst our astonished stares

This isn’t appropriate: don’t you sweep up glass shards and throw them out

You don’t pick them up with your hands

to cut your hands open on jagged edges

it is when a person walks at night

that they stumble for they do not have a light

On Notre Dame she breaks open and weeps

Watching the men on their crosses: her kin as the criminal

From the dark she steps into the softly glowing streetlight

Your friend is dead - Your son is dead - our friends….

and we wept

“See, how much He loved him!”

and we hiked our robes, and ran for him


Reflection Questions:

  1. We tend to like overlapping stories of scripture. What meaning arises for you as you consider this poem?

  2. What do the different images evoke for you?

  3. Are there particular voices within the poem that resonate with you?

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